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ok st, help me write this out (please, i know its the weekend)

Posted by Truman Nov 5 '11, 08:49

I need to say that i wrote discussion points and responses to FCC proposals which were submitted to the FCC.

I keep getting stuck at:

Prepared

Responses:

ok, brain is mush. so if you want to abbreviate Senior Auditor, it would Sr. Auditor right? - Truman Nov 5, 09:11
so here is what i gots - Truman Nov 5, 09:00 9
- I think you should broaden these where you can, to talk about what you and your company got out of these accomplishments. - Roger More Nov 5, 09:31
- developed and presented responses for state and federal regulatory agency requests -- nm - Beaker Nov 5, 09:18
- it's too bad you can't mention some thing about working well under added pressure and stress of a really lousy boss somehow -- nm - BroDuckJen Nov 5, 09:03 5
  - He can save it for the interview and sing Under Pressure.....that will leave a big impression! -- nm - CrankYanker Nov 5, 09:07
  - well, those are points for my previous job, not my current one. not sure how that could be worked in -- nm - Truman Nov 5, 09:04 3
    - ah - sorry - I'm behind then ... I thought you still worked for the nipple guy -- nm - BroDuckJen Nov 5, 09:05 2
      - i do, here are my points for that job. - Truman Nov 5, 09:05 1
        
        You use firm wide too many times. -- nm - amanda, car Nov 5, 09:32
- Are "company" and "firm" the same thing? If so, I would use the same term. -- nm - CrankYanker Nov 5, 09:02
FWIW - instead of wrote - you could use a verb like - designed or crafted - OR - add the phrase "responsible for writing ... " -- I think if I get - BroDuckJen Nov 5, 08:57 1
- "developed" could work too -- nm - Beaker Nov 5, 09:10
I don't understand your question. Are you saying you want to use a word other than "wrote"? -- nm - mara Nov 5, 08:51 4
- trying to make that into a coherent sentence for my resume, actually - Truman Nov 5, 08:52 3
  - Sure, but why not say "wrote discussion points and responses to FCC proposals which were submitted to the FCC"? Are you saying you're considering - mara Nov 5, 08:53 2
    - heh, this is what I was thinking too. Easily understood. - CrankYanker Nov 5, 08:56
    - no, i just couldnt figure out how to say it. brain is mush. -- nm - Truman Nov 5, 08:54

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