dear CY
Posted by
zeitgeist
Jan 8 '14, 13:58
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your stories need more texture, involve more our senses, we need to be able to smell them from your sentences,...needs to be more contextual relationship to the lives of the oridinary folks they flash (literally) by. ie: i would imagine a beautiful rich woman standing naked in a limo skylight would be like that famous zoom in jaws when schneider realizes a shark just ate a kid in front of him.
that was the main lesson from a photographers sales seminar, get all the senses into the story
the average person does not know what a $5,000 little black dress looks like, what it feels like, what it sounds like sliding across the leather seats
also, get some follow up stories on some of those brit fans, it would be awesome to find out how their lives were changed, inspired or even damaged by their brush with the goddess muse. idon't it will be that hard to search fan sites to find some eeven if they did sign non disclosure contracts
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