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In response to "Working in a blog post, but I don't know if it's good enough to post on my regular tech blog" by Beryllium

It's a bit stiff and teacherish.

Posted by tobor.2 (aka liioulu) Jun 13 '15, 15:36

Read it out loud and see how that feels. It should sound more conversational than lecture.

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Other than that the content is good, well worth posting on that score. -- nm - tobor.2 Jun 13, 15:37 1
- Thanks for the tips. I'd already done one pass to make it partially first person, perhaps more of that would help. -- nm - Beryllium Jun 13, 15:42

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