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In response to "STIS: Does this sentence have any punctuation errors?" by Subversive

You are correct about the comma, but also that does not seem like a complete sentence.

Posted by con_carne May 18 '09, 08:11

Who is doing the assessing?

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It's from a sales brochure of my former company. I still do a little contract work for them and the president showed me the new brochure excitedly - Subversive May 18, 08:13 4
- Marketing materials usually have fragments like that, so in that context one might work -- nm - con_carne May 18, 08:17 1
  - I put the whole paragraph below. -- nm - Subversive May 18, 08:17
- that's a shame. if it's all like that, it must be a horror. -- nm - loosilu May 18, 08:15 1
  - my quickie rewrite: "It even checks for identity fraud and alerts authorities when necessary." -- nm - loosilu May 18, 08:16

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