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In response to "You are correct about the comma, but also that does not seem like a complete sentence." by con_carne

It's from a sales brochure of my former company. I still do a little contract work for them and the president showed me the new brochure excitedly

Posted by Subversive (aka Subversive) May 18 '09, 08:13

yesterday. It's talking about the voice recognition software capabilities the company has. It's all fragments, and sort of crappy. I think they spent a ton of money on it too. Uggh.

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Marketing materials usually have fragments like that, so in that context one might work -- nm - con_carne May 18, 08:17 1
- I put the whole paragraph below. -- nm - Subversive May 18, 08:17
that's a shame. if it's all like that, it must be a horror. -- nm - loosilu May 18, 08:15 1
- my quickie rewrite: "It even checks for identity fraud and alerts authorities when necessary." -- nm - loosilu May 18, 08:16

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It's from a sales brochure of my former company. I still do a little contract work for them and the president showed me the new brochure excitedly

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