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In response to ""even assess for and alert, authorities if it senses identity fraud"?" by Reagen

no no no. "Assess for, and alert, authorities." Oh, I see the problem. I'm not moving it, I'm adding a second one. -- nm

Posted by loosilu (aka loosilu2) May 18 '09, 08:27

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but "authorities if it senses identity fraud" can't stand alone as a clause. - Reagen May 18, 08:30 4
- isn't that the same as my previously posted rewrite? -- nm - loosilu May 18, 08:31 3
  - maybe? I didn't see it. -- nm - Reagen May 18, 08:32 2
    - here. not even in the IM! -- (link) - loosilu May 18, 08:33 [Backboard] 1
      - Yes, the rewrites are better. I was meaning if you kept the order of the words the same. - Subversive May 18, 08:37
and you are still wrong, because the thing doesn't assess for authorities. -- nm - TFox May 18, 08:29 5
- Correct. -- nm - pmb May 18, 08:31
- I ... crap. dammit. fuck fuck fuck. THe sentence still sucks! -- nm - loosilu May 18, 08:29 3
  - thank you. -- nm - TFox May 18, 08:32 2
    - hate. -- nm - loosilu May 18, 08:34 1
      - you'll do better next time. i still have hope for you. commas are really hard. - TFox May 18, 08:36

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