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In response to "or (spoilers)" by oblique

*spoils*

The Turbines: When even your main character is commenting on how implausible the location of that switch is, you know your writing's bad.

The Pearl: You just KNOW that they had the idea for a fight in a mirror maze first and then had to figure out how to fit it in.


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