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In response to "LIR: B2: What do you guys think of this?" by oblique

Just a suggestion

Posted by Strongbad (aka Rambler14) Jul 21 '20, 12:39

Use "it would have on employee morale" instead of "we could lose valuable members of the team down the line"

in paragraph 1

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maybe "employee morale and retention"? -- nm - JaxSean Jul 21, 12:48 1
- Sure, that works too. -- nm - Strongbad Jul 21, 12:49
Well said. -- nm - Spawn Jul 21, 12:40

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