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In response to
"LIR: B2: What do you guys think of this?"
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oblique
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i'd put the last bit first: you're losing productivity due to this policy. that's the eye grabber and i think the rest is just good background and
Posted by
colin (aka colinski)
Jul 21 '20, 12:44
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explanation.
if you have numbers of days/hours lost, or can speak to a reduced capacity to serve customers, that would probably also be helpful.
all in all, well said.
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