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In response to "but" by Andie

To me, that would only serve to make certain he'd fight back

a betrayal works cuz it's unexpected; an attack works cuz it's overpowering force. They didn't have any of that here.

They deviated from the book so much I don't feel they merit much leeway. That's a battle scene, it's important. Show it.





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