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In response to
"Tonight I finally posted my "Mastodon: The Somewhat Overcomplicated Version" explainer. -- (link)"
by
Beryllium
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I really like the tone. One note on a specific sentence…
Posted by
Mop🧹 (aka rburriel)
Aug 30 '23, 21:22
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“Now let's say someone jumps into the conversation from the Jerkwad community.” This sentence has some object confusion. It would work better as “Now let’s say someone from the Jerkwad community jumps into the conversation.” or even “…joins the conversation.” This latter phrasing is a nice little callback to the old AOL and IRC days of “Bill has joined the conversation.”
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