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Does this cover letter/email sound too "ChatGPT"-y? -- (edited)

Posted by znufrii May 13 '24, 19:06

[This is for the lead that was given to me by someone who is the closest thing I have to a mentor at my current job. the hiring manager is a former colleague who I never worked with directly. I asked ChatGPT to rewrite my initial, admittedly shitty, email, and then edited it to the below]

[You],

I hope this email finds you well.

I am writing to express my interest in an opportunity you may have for someone with demonstrated expertise in using ArcPro for drafting and filing registration statements. Over the past two years, while onboarding and servicing a new client here, I have developed and cultivated a comprehensive understanding of the platform, and I am eager to leverage my capabilities and expertise in a new role.

I have attached my current resume for your review. I look forward to connecting to discuss how my background and experience might align with your needs.

Warm regards,

[Me]

Responses:

"I hope this email finds you well' has become parodied. I'd ditch it in favor of an expression that thanks someone for their time/attention. -- nm* - Qale May 13, 20:04
A suggested tweak - Pippy 🇨🇦 May 13, 19:33 3
- Good suggestions, thanks! - znufrii May 13, 19:40 2
  - Hee! I will look up florid -- nm - Pippy 🇨🇦 May 13, 19:57
  - Overall short and to the point. As you said a bit florid. -- nm - . May 13, 19:45

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