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In response to "it shouldnt take you more than 7 hours to finish in on normal." by tRuMaN

can I give you a little bit of constructive criticism on your review?

Posted by crash davis (aka crash davis) Sep 23 '09, 11:04

I'm not waiting for your answer as here it is anyways.

I was perfectly fine with it having played Halo 3, but you may want to lay out a little more exposition at the start for those who don't. I knew instantly what you meant when you reference being a Spartan, but non-Halo players might find all that confusing unless its explained up front.

Also, when you say six stars, I assume its out of ten, but you might want to clarify it.

Other than that, I liked your review a lot.

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I already fixed the stars bit. yeah, I have a meeting, but I will see if I can explain that bit a bit later. -- nm - tRuMaN Sep 23, 11:05 5
- ok crash, just for you, I fixed that and added stuff for you. -- nm - tRuMaN Sep 23, 11:10 4
  - also..."grafted with medal" shoule be "metal" -- nm - Remlik Sep 23, 11:13 2
    - blame crash. -- nm - tRuMaN Sep 23, 11:15 1
      - but of course! -- nm - Remlik Sep 23, 11:16
  - :) -- nm - crash davis Sep 23, 11:12

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