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Looking for some suggestions...this will sound odd but I have a hard time talking about myself in email when addressing people on a professional level

Posted by Capstern Dec 7 '09, 12:20

I am crafting am email to introduce myself to the customers I am responsible for the care and feeding of at my new job.

I am trying ot figure how much to tell them...

The letter has to tell them who I am and what my role is in relation to them but do you think it needs any of my history or "resume" in it - or is it better to keep it simple and be like

I am such and such
I am here to do such and such any questions contact me??

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You may be better off canceling all verbs or forms of the verb 'to be'... - OAE Dec 7, 12:53
and when I say talk about myself I mean... - Capstern Dec 7, 12:21 3
- the only history i would give would be maybe one line like.. - Elf Andie Dec 7, 12:35
- Their focus is probably more on themselves. Introduce yourself, tell them why you're there, and ask what you can do to make their life easier. -- nm - MojaveMeg Dec 7, 12:34 1
  - nice both of you thanks!!! -- nm - Capstern Dec 7, 12:47

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Looking for some suggestions...this will sound odd but I have a hard time talking about myself in email when addressing people on a professional level

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