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In response to "prolly for the best - maybe you'll have a great Birthday Dream :)" by JenBro

a second act for my latest rewrite -- nm

Posted by the 40 year old virgin (aka chris) Apr 5 '10, 16:38

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do you or would you ever let anyone read a partially finished work? - JenBro Apr 5, 16:44 9
- i am in an online writers' workshop where i post pages for feedback - the 40 year old virgin Apr 5, 16:50 8
  - oh I'm sure you are just being overly critical. - JenBro Apr 5, 16:52 7
    - dialogue is not hard for me - the 40 year old virgin Apr 5, 16:55 2
      - perhaps you are just missing a muse - you should make ST your muse :) there - all fixed -- nm - JenBro Apr 5, 17:00 1
        
        "museubi" -- nm - the 40 year old virgin Apr 5, 17:04
    - He's no george lucas, I'm damn sure of that. - Beryllium Apr 5, 16:54 3
      - george admits he is an awful writer. the difference between now and then is he was smart enough to let others rewrite the original trilogy - the 40 year old virgin Apr 5, 16:57 2
        
        indeed. I wonder what caused him to get stupider? More money than brains, I guess. -- nm - Beryllium Apr 5, 17:00
        
        "so then Han starts bitching and moaning about how much he hates Chewie and then he goes and kills all of Greedo's family" -- nm - George Lucas original draft Apr 5, 17:00

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