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In response to "i am in an online writers' workshop where i post pages for feedback" by the 40 year old virgin

oh I'm sure you are just being overly critical.

Posted by JenBro Apr 5 '10, 16:52

I always enjoy your postings here - you are very witty and I would suspect quite good at dialog exchange.

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dialogue is not hard for me - the 40 year old virgin Apr 5, 16:55 2
- perhaps you are just missing a muse - you should make ST your muse :) there - all fixed -- nm - JenBro Apr 5, 17:00 1
  - "museubi" -- nm - the 40 year old virgin Apr 5, 17:04
He's no george lucas, I'm damn sure of that. - Beryllium Apr 5, 16:54 3
- george admits he is an awful writer. the difference between now and then is he was smart enough to let others rewrite the original trilogy - the 40 year old virgin Apr 5, 16:57 2
  - indeed. I wonder what caused him to get stupider? More money than brains, I guess. -- nm - Beryllium Apr 5, 17:00
  - "so then Han starts bitching and moaning about how much he hates Chewie and then he goes and kills all of Greedo's family" -- nm - George Lucas original draft Apr 5, 17:00

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