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a) its awesome. b) perhaps replace "He gave an answer." with facepalm or something similar.

Posted by TFox Aug 3 '10, 14:05

c) is this shot with the two of you intercut, or sitting next to each other? I'm reading it as though its intercut cut footage. I hope that's how you're doing it; it's funnier that way.

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(also, what was the specific answer and question? might make it a hair funnier, esp if its very knowitall or obscure...) -- nm - TFox Aug 3, 14:07 10
- Good suggestion on the forehead slap if she doesn't deliver it well enough with a sigh in her tone. Re: The question...Nothing special. - Name Withheld By Request Aug 3, 14:09 9
  - (if you think she'd really sell a good headdesk, that'd be ideal. even if it was the only shot with a desk.) - TFox Aug 3, 14:13
  - i think the actual question and answer, even if slightly fudged if you can't remember, make the story a little better. that's me. -- nm - TFox Aug 3, 14:10 7
    - yeah, because it sounds like the answer is the punchline. -- nm - loosilu Aug 3, 14:13 6
      - him: so i told her i thought they were a great representation of modern lighting technique... her: *headdesk* -- nm - TFox Aug 3, 14:15 5
        
        Or go with a simple silent look at the camera, like in The Office - Guigue Aug 3, 14:20 2
        
        I vote this. If she can deliver the subtlety, this kills. (nm) - musubi Aug 3, 15:02
        
        yes, this. "The Pam". -- nm - TFox Aug 3, 14:26
        
        I like it. That perfect and it'll let me work H.R. Giger into a wedding clip and anytime you can do that, you just have to. -- nm - Name Withheld By Request Aug 3, 14:19
        
        there ya go. -- nm - loosilu Aug 3, 14:15

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a) its awesome. b) perhaps replace "He gave an answer." with *facepalm* or something similar.

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a) its awesome. b) perhaps replace "He gave an answer." with facepalm or something similar.