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"sweet -- nm"
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oblique
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thanks. i'm pretty proud of it actually. i wasn't sure i could get back to being christmasy starting at the low point, and make it believable.
Posted by
TFox
Dec 17 '08, 07:25
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it ends a little more abruptly than is maybe plausible, but really, its the point of the story where the reader will get the point and everything has paid off and its time to wrap it up. i think they will appreciate my trite, concise ending. :)
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